Friday, February 6, 2009

HAIKU FAIL

After giving blood, I trip,
somehow catch myself.
Going out tonight, I skip.

...this is what happens when I am really tired and don't feel like going to bed because WTF NO ONE IS IN OUR SUITE.

Might be extend-able though, into, shoot, what was it, senryu? Something that just had random 5 and 7 lines however you wanted them. Clearly I need my CWII daybook up in this place.

3 comments:

  1. Choka. 5-7-5, 7-5, 7-5,..., 7-7.

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  2. Word.

    Also, one time, a friend of mine posted a statues in German, and the only comment was "wort."

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  3. That makes me think of The Sword in the Stone or plants (like "mallow wort") before I think of the skin virus that people used to think they got from toads. Does that mean something?

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